Missed.
1.WhenDid I lose sight of her?in the blink of an eyethere and gonewhispering goodbye as she fadedso quietI didn't seeuntil it was too latetoo lateit was alwaysour beginnings were endingsquick like...
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poetic ~ I appreciate the reply, but in respect to it, I seem to have missed my mark. with the changes, what are your thoughts now?"These poems do not live: It's a sad diagnosis...And they stupidly...
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My thoughts are of losing sight of onself, PA -- of losing your sense of self -- and not realizing until it seems far too late to go back. But I'm usually off the mark with these things. Poetry, and...
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This reads to me like the end of a relationship....one that faded almost before you realised it...until it was too late to recapture what you once had...whether or not I'm near the mark, this one has...
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